Friday, June 6, 2014

Cancer Haiku, The Second

Chemicals bombard
besiege and bamboozle my
poor body's beachheads 

1 comment:

  1. Just one man's opinion, but I think this is much stronger than the last. The reference to your breastworks as "beachheads" is both splendid and personal -- in that culturally, and I mean human culture by this, we have placed women's breasts firmly in relation to earth and fertility and personal -- in the sense that we all have breasts: Even though some of us BIG, FAT Fellas have enormous vestigial man-boobs. Good JOB, Honey! Love, RicH